midgetjess ([info]midgetjess) wrote,

Draft Writing

I am working on a book, I have no idea what type of book this is going to be or what exactly it will be about. I will be posting my writing here, just in case anyone wants to read. Jess

Oh and please, if you have any suggestions or comments post them. I can use some constructive criticism.

“The only chance I have is to grow up, when I get older, I will get another chance.” A mysterious voice whispers, “A chance at what?” “When I grow up I will get a chance to make everything right, I will be able to begin anew, and leave everyone and everything behind.” A distant presence asks,” Why would you want to leave everything or everyone behind?” “Because, right now I am ruled by people and the things they have to offer, when I grow up I will no longer feed off of other souls like a parasite.” “What makes you think it will be any different then?” “ All I have is hope, without hope I am nothing, especially now, especially now that you are gone.” “ Me? But I am talking to you right now.” “No Steven, I am talking to you, and you are not here.” You are a lost book of memories; you are the first hope I had, the only hope. “Now, my only hope is another life.”

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[info]blmark

June 22 2006, 22:22:40 UTC 5 years ago

Great start!

I like the way it's a question and answer style of writeing.
Make me want to keep reading.

Peace!

Anonymous

June 23 2006, 18:52:21 UTC 5 years ago

Givin that its something I can relate to makes it easier to understand. Not sure how I feel about this but it is a good start and does make me want to read on (if there is to be more). *nod*

[info]onlynelson

June 23 2006, 18:54:44 UTC 5 years ago

Aaaaaand that was me forgetting to log in.

heh.

[info]persian_guy

June 25 2006, 16:17:32 UTC 5 years ago

Hmm, so I take it this chick is some kind of vampire/warlock person who in order to survive has to feast on the souls of others and somehow consumed the soul of her loved one and wants to erase her memories by acquring a new life by some strange means that involves traveling the world on a flying chocobo, participating in Jpop concerts, beer chugging contests that result in one night stands with various characters from Capcom and Konami video games, and secret Jutsu training from an old hermit that held the rank of legendary Sanin who lives in some parallel world ontop of a cloud which can only be reached via some magical keyblade.

I might of gone just a tiny bit astray there at the end. Well you get the point :)

Looking forward to reading more!

Anonymous

June 25 2006, 20:50:56 UTC 5 years ago

Hmmm

Well no, but your story sounds awsome! Well, except for the pops signing part.

[info]persian_guy

June 26 2006, 16:01:04 UTC 5 years ago

Yea i'm not a fan of the jpop/pop scene either, just thought i'd throw that in there. :)
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