I am working on a book, I have no idea what type of book this is going to be or what exactly it will be about. I will be posting my writing here, just in case anyone wants to read. Jess
Oh and please, if you have any suggestions or comments post them. I can use some constructive criticism.
“The only chance I have is to grow up, when I get older, I will get another chance.” A mysterious voice whispers, “A chance at what?” “When I grow up I will get a chance to make everything right, I will be able to begin anew, and leave everyone and everything behind.” A distant presence asks,” Why would you want to leave everything or everyone behind?” “Because, right now I am ruled by people and the things they have to offer, when I grow up I will no longer feed off of other souls like a parasite.” “What makes you think it will be any different then?” “ All I have is hope, without hope I am nothing, especially now, especially now that you are gone.” “ Me? But I am talking to you right now.” “No Steven, I am talking to you, and you are not here.” You are a lost book of memories; you are the first hope I had, the only hope. “Now, my only hope is another life.”
June 22 2006, 22:22:40 UTC 5 years ago
Great start!
I like the way it's a question and answer style of writeing.Make me want to keep reading.
Peace!
Anonymous
June 23 2006, 18:52:21 UTC 5 years ago
June 23 2006, 18:54:44 UTC 5 years ago
heh.
June 25 2006, 16:17:32 UTC 5 years ago
I might of gone just a tiny bit astray there at the end. Well you get the point :)
Looking forward to reading more!
Anonymous
June 25 2006, 20:50:56 UTC 5 years ago
Hmmm
Well no, but your story sounds awsome! Well, except for the pops signing part.June 26 2006, 16:01:04 UTC 5 years ago